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My Poems

Well, these are some free verse poems I wrote when I was in the mood. Wrote them off the top of my head, so keep that in mind, since I know they aren't that great. I don't know the text limit per-post, so I guess I'll post one every now and then and try to get two in per post, without it being longer then this.

Acropolis By Storm

Your makeup's smeared, better redo your face
Redo the past, so push play and erase
Your dancing with yourself
No one wants you, no one ever will
I"ve had enough of this town, it's an eyesore and a waste of sound
And it's too bright for my eyes
And I can hear you cry
*beep* you for living, you can all go to hell,
Your too busy acting like your someone else
"Who me?" Yeah, you, the Chosen Ones
Just pretend you are yourself for once

Excuse my language, I"ll watch what I say
Pardon me for talking that way
As if anyone was listening
No you didn't hear a thing
they could choke and I wouldn't care
You could drown and I"d hog all the air
Go ahead and take me off your list
Just pretend I don't exist
I need a cigarette to make me cough, cause the fresh air is ticking me off
Now I"m afraid to open my eyes
Cause everything I learn to love dies
They say California's going to sink into the sea
These people believe everything they read
A nation dictated my magazines and TV
While a young girl scars herself to look like Britney

Oh, wouldn't that be the day
When ships sail over this place, all the bullshit would float up to the surface
All the silicon, plastic, and hollow objects

Well, I never liked the beach, bikinis are lame
Guys with muscles to flex and maintain
Wave after wave, day after day
I wish it would dry up, I wish it would drain

This boy hates himself cause of what he was taught
Believes his heart is clogged with impure thoughts
And he hides in a closet and pretends nothing's wrong
All cause a woman never quite turned him on

For christmas he asked for a doll
Daddy brought home a brand new football
He said, "Remember son, the winner gets the crown"
"Don't you dare lose, or let me down"

You see, that's what what's wrong with this world
Everything's predetermined by the sole
And the cake gets fed to the cheater
While the child is forced to follow the leader
The drugs market themselves on TV
Advertisements targeted towards teens
While the role model's commiting the crime
Future president's get de-wise, and snort lies

Oh, cause your father's a powerful man
With a good name, lots of money and land
Except the balots were mysteriously lost
Your money won you a country, now you"re the boss

Now oil prices are high
So send youngsters overseas to die
To pursue your need for global expansion
While you sit back and relax in your big white mansion
Oh, and all you are is a leech
You suck on anything that breathes
You may as well walk around on your knees
You"re a good actor, but you don't fool me

Edited: Micalan on 4th Jul, 2005 - 9:02am

Poems My

Your writing sounds almost tormented in its anger towards certain types of people. I can really feel your emotion through your writing. Some people don't like swear words in writing, but I think that it should be used if it necessarily reflects your feelings best at the time. Good job, I look forward to hopefully reading more. You also seem to have a very pessimistic outlook on life, at least from your poems. Is that the way you intend it to be, like your self, or is it put in there for the purpose of the poem and not part of who you are?