Don't beat yourself up buddy. If you can upload the original photo, that is if the person behind it doesn't mind, then we can make a comparison.
Keep working at it. Even though this is not the best you can always improve through practice and get much better. I can not paint to save my life so my hat is off to you.
I'm sure I'll paint again someday, but I've decided to make 2016 my writing year. So that's what I'm focused on now.
Looks nice but incomplete. Looking at it I would think it is a work in progress and maybe that is why you are featuring it because you want feedback about where you have reached with it. I could be entirely wrong.
Its a nice piece but I'll be honest, I'd rate it as beginner level. It needs work on blending and proportion otherwise it looks like something made out of unfinished wax.
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