
JB, is your post above, actually posted somewhere I could readily reference, or should I copy it for future reference?
Yeah, I guess I should keep a tighter leash on my writing style. I have been going a little nuts with the prose. Sometimes, it's hard to resist, especially when I'm getting such good material to work with. Still, I need to be more considerant of others. I'll tone it down. Well, after my character comes down from her feather induced high. It wouldn't be plausible if she just started acting sane for no reason.